It was a dark night and Linda was walking home by herself. It was raining hard and a cold wind was blowing. The street was deserted and Linda, who had always been afraid of the dark, began to walk more quickly.
Suddenly Linda thought she heard steps behind her. At first she told herself that she was imagining it, but after a few minutes she heard the steps again. She looked around and noticed a dark figure walking quickly behind her. Linda was terrified and began to walk faster, but the sound of the footsteps behind her became faster too. Linda could feel her heart beating as she began to run.
Then she saw the lights of a restaurant and hurried inside. A moment later, the door opened and a man entered. He was out of breath and didn't speak. As he took a step towards her, Linda opened her mouth to scream. At that moment, she noticed that he was holding her glove - the one she had dropped on the pavement while she was walking.WRITING PLAN:
PAST SIMPLE,
PAST CONTINOUS,
TIME AND SEQUENCE EXPRESSIONS,
ADJECTIVES (-ED, -ING)
1st paragraph: OPENING
(It sets the scene with details of time, place, atmosphere and characters).
It was a dark night and Linda was walking home by herself. It was raining hard and a cold wind was blowing. The street was deserted and Linda, who had always been afraid of the dark, began to walk more quickly.
2nd paragraph: BODY
(It develops the plot with details of events and characters).
Suddenly Linda thought she heard steps behind her. At first she told herself that she was imagining it, but after a few minutes she heard the steps again. She looked around and noticed a dark figure walking quickly behind her. Linda was terrified and began to walk faster, but the sound of the footsteps behind her became faster too. Linda could feel her heart beating as she began to run.
3rd paragraph: CLOSING
(It ends the story with the reason for what happened or the consequences).
Then she saw the lights of a restaurant and hurried inside. A moment later, the door opened and a man entered. He was out of breath and didn't speak. As he took a step towards her, Linda opened her mouth to scream. At that moment, she noticed that he was holding her glove - the one she had dropped on the pavement while she was walking.
( 177 words)
Now, it is your turn to write about one of the following topics:
a frightening experience, a bad dream or nightmare or a strange happening.
minimum: 100 words
Remember to check the "writing plan" above!!!!
a frightening experience, a bad dream or nightmare or a strange happening.
minimum: 100 words
Remember to check the "writing plan" above!!!!
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It was a night and Juan was going in his house friends but suddenly it began to raining and began to foggy and he began ran but he had cold and late he had frezzing. He began ran more quickly for his house.
Thirty minuts late he was arriving his house and ten minuts late he arrived his house and he very happed but suddenly and light switch off he very fear and he was beging cry and the door closed suddenly and he was going to bedroom. When he was going to bed, but the bed had other person and he screamed.
Later he was seeing the bed and he saw his friends and his friends said happy birthday. He said is fantastic but very fearing, but he said this an experience and they was going to party. He said was very incredible the door of closed and light switch off was very cool, but they friends said what not this we...
It was a night that I was watching TV at night. I had just seen the "Madeleine case" on TV, and I was frightend.
I was half an hour without being able to sleep, because I closed my eyes and I saw in my mind Gerry nad Kate McCann with they`re daughter Madeleine`s boddy in their car, taking her to a mountain to burry the ded boddy.
Finaly,I wa able to sleep, because I thought it was just a silly TV gossip about Praia da Luz, and it was nothing to do with me.
My story began on a Winter's Night. It was one of those nights that by very cold and windy. At that time I was in my house a chocolate cake. On the street not heard otherwise than wind, began to fall a few drops of rain. Suddenly there was nobody on the streets. That night I stayed alone at my home. My parents and my brother had gone to see as my grandmother. Suddenly the light went, I entered my room to get the phone and find a few candles. .Then, I heard some keys trying to open the door, I was paralyzed, Who could be? My parents were gone could not be, then I went running and Suddenly the door opened. In the end it was my mother who had forgotten the keys to the car.
It was a cold morning and Hanna was running for the field. Every morning she was going out to run, she loved sports. The field was deserted but suddenly she heard a shout. The shout came from a left house. She went to the left house. She was frightened
When she was near to the house she looked for the windows. She saw a woman in the bed. The woman had a baby in the arms. The baby was crying but the woman wasn’t doing anything. Hanna was calling the police when she saw that the mobile phone didn’t have coverage. She entered to the room for the windows. The woman was dead. Hanna took rapidly the baby. In a table there was a baby bottle. Hanna was feeding the baby when a man appeared.
Hanna was scared. He said to her that he would not do anything to her. He told her that he didn’t kill the woman. She was sick and was living alone with his son. He was a hunter and had seen the dead woman. He couldn’t call the police because he didn’t have mobile phone. Hanna, the baby and the hunter were towards the police station. But the man was taking them for a strange way. Hanna asked him that he was doing, he didn’t answer her. Nowadays nobody knows anything either of Hanna or of the baby or of the hunter.
It was a hot night of summer, when Michelle remained to house of his friend Sasha, because his parents had gone away of weekend. They were eating delicacies and seeing a movie when suddenly I call someone to the door.
They opened the door and there had nobody, then they were begun to scaring. They returned to the dining room and they received a call. They decided to go out to ask for help. They didn't know where were going. Suddenly they listen to a few steps. Every time they were walking more rapid.
They came to a very solitary street, where they found a vagabond. Michelle saw a shade and Sasha decided to go to the police. Michelle, with fear, agreed. Running they came to the police and there they saw his parents, friend and others, giving them a surprise.
One night of 2000 in Ecuador, Where Ilived rained was stronger and thumder. 1 am Some curb noise. I haved lot fear and my brohers whit my parents, do not to knewed and the rained very stronged . They walk through our yard.We
ask me helping to the tenants and caming make that are desparting. was a experience incredible. Put also caned been very dreadful.
My history began during one night very cold. It was twelve o'clock of the night, it(she) was alone in house because my family had gone home of my premium(cousin). I was in the room seeing the televición a movie of terror, it was a question of a few ghosts. Tape-worm little fear. Depronto listens(listen) to a noise in my room, not wise if to enter or not, seconds but late the door was opened and listens(listen) to steps in the corridor. I covered myself with the blanket, it(she) was scared depronto I fight the foot and shout. And I realized that she was my small sister who had remained slept in my room. But scare very much.
One day, Anne's parents were travelling and for she was not so alone, she invited a friend to spend the night. This morning she had watched news and she had listened that a murderer was escaped last night.
Her friend went to Anne’s house and they were speaking all the night but later they were in the Anne’s bedroom they began to listen a tap open. Anne did not want to go downstairs because she was very afraid. But her friend had not afraid and went to see. Spent 15 minutes but her friend does not came back. Spent other 15 minutes more but she do not came back. In this moment Anne began to feel like sucking him the hand her dog. When dogs are afraid they suck their owners. When spent 1 hour Anne decided go to downstairs. She went to the kitchen and found her friend and her dog dead in the floor. She starts to cried while she read a writing in the wall. Writing said “You do not always think that is the dog who suck you the hand”. Suddenly the murderer appeared and he nailed him a knife.
The next morning when her parents came back to their home, they found to Anne’s friend, the dog and Anne dead in the floor’s kitchen, the tap open and all wet. When police arrived the murderer was far away in another house waiting for their next victims.
Finally this week I want to recommend a film: El Orfanato
It was a stormy night and Reynolds was alone at home, bored and waiting his girlfriend Ella to do anything interesting. There were only some people running to their houses in the streets and the storm was more and more heavy. Suddenly the doorbell rang.
Reynolds opened the door and there is not anybody. Then he went to the back of the house. He looked for somebody but didn’t find anybody. While he was looking, somebody closed the door. He heard the sudden closing of the door and began to be frightened. Immediately Reynolds came into house and took a bat. Quickly he tried to call the police, but the pone’s cable was cut. The situation was too frightening. Reynolds was going slowly upstairs when a man wearing black clothes appeared upstairs. Reynolds saw the man and after fell downstairs.
Reynolds was unconscious for ten minutes. When he opened his eyes Ella was lying and crying beside him. He wake up suffocated and she stopped cry and began to shout absurd words. Then Reynolds began to be annoyed because he didn’t understand what was happening. He asked Ella and she, annoyed too, told he what happened. The man who Reynolds saw wearing black clothes was a disgusting burglar. Reynolds fell downstairs because the burglar shot him a sleeping pill. The burglar stole all valuable things there were and surely was laughing in someplace. Finally Reynolds began to cry, the burglar stole his Play Station and he will be bored for the rest of his adolescence.
I don't know the reason because the second paragraph is not separated of the third paragraph, I hope now will be separated.
It was a stormy night and Reynolds was alone at home, bored and waiting his girlfriend Ella to do anything interesting. There were only some people running to their houses in the streets and the storm was more and more heavy. Suddenly the doorbell rang.
Reynolds opened the door and there is not anybody. Then he went to the back of the house. He looked for somebody but didn’t find anybody. While he was looking, somebody closed the door. He heard the sudden closing of the door and began to be frightened. Immediately Reynolds came into house and took a bat. Quickly he tried to call the police, but the pone’s cable was cut. The situation was too frightening. Reynolds was going slowly upstairs when a man wearing black clothes appeared upstairs. Reynolds saw the man and after fell downstairs.
Reynolds was unconscious for ten minutes. When he opened his eyes Ella was lying and crying beside him. He wake up suffocated and she stopped cry and began to shout absurd words. Then Reynolds began to be annoyed because he didn’t understand what was happening. He asked Ella and she, annoyed too, told he what happened. The man who Reynolds saw wearing black clothes was a disgusting burglar. Reynolds fell downstairs because the burglar shot him a sleeping pill. The burglar stole all valuable things there were and surely was laughing in someplace. Finally Reynolds began to cry, the burglar stole his Play Station and he will be bored for the rest of his adolescence.
Maria lived with her best friend Judith in a house, which is in the forest. That night was raining hard and a cold wind was blowing. It was a dense fog in the road. Maria and Judith had been to go to a restaurant in the city for dinner.
Judith caught the car to go to a restaurant, while Maria stayed at home. Judith, as she approached the car, saw a few steps behind her, but gave no importance. Judith while was driving saw that a car approached her, the lights of the car he entranced. Judith wanted to stop and then gave realize that the brakes were not and suddenly crashed. When Maria arrived at the restaurant was given realize that Judith wasn‘t. She decided to go home to see if Judith was there, and when he arrived was given notice that they were. Then he called the mobile phone, but she wasn’t told. Maria went to the forest to look and saw the car with Judith inside. He called an ambulance and when he arrived, took Judith to hospital.
Next week Maria went in search of Judith to hospital. Fortunately Judith had just suffered a blow to the head. Maria took her home and at night the ambulance boy appeared. Next year Judith married with the boy.
It was a summer night. Victoria and her lover David newly married, decided to go on a cruise of the Caribbean Sea. The ship was big, as in the dreams of the newlyweds. Everything was perfect.
That night the wind blew hard. Victoria beforehand that something was going to go wrong. That something bad was going to happen.
At dinner time Victoria and her husband David fell to the restaurant, and heard that the captain of the ship informed the port that the ship lost control. A few minutes later the captain of the ship informed the passengers that the boat lost control as it was coming to the Bermuda Triangle. Passengers were nervous and just the propeller was hooked algae. The ship couldn’t move. Then the captain decided to call the port and they sent assistance.
They spent a few hours and the boat completely lost control. The assistance had not arrived. So Victoria and David decided to take a boat and go back, because the situation was untenable.
A week later Victoria and David heard the news that the boat in which they were had disappeared and haven’t found any survivors.
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