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Hi! My nickname is Mike. I'm 16. I live in Barcelona with my family and I study at IES Barri Bèsos.
I spend my free-time reading books, drawing or listening to english C music (I like much RS)
There aren't much WC things which I don't like. But probably making the wash WC is the most I hate.
Finally I want to recommend a song: More than Words from Extreme
Good Weekend for you all!!!
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hello C, I am called manuel, I been WC 15 years old and I fulfill the -A 16 within two weeks. + study in WC the -A IES barri besòs of Barcelona, I am trainer of soccer 5 WC and I like music, the -A sports and to leave WC with the friends
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Hello P My name is Alex
I have WC 17 years I'm fron Equator but +W life WC in Barcelona with my mother end Sp my brother but +W have two brothers in Equator.
I'm studing Sp in WC the -A school IES Barri Besos WO.
I' ve must WC friends end Sp they are very entertainWC. My sport favourity WO Sp is the -A futbol Sp end Sp +W like listening to music end Sp too WO playing futbol in a equipo WC.
I've+W a rabbit. At school my favourity Sp subject are Historia end Economia Sp Sp Sp.
I like read WF bookS/P the WC filosofia Sp well I'm think MNC.
Well this in Sp the end.
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Hi! my C name's Gaby and I'm 16. I live in Barcelona with my parents and my brother (he's 20 and he's studying at University UPC WO).
I've got two pets, a cat (Mishu, I know that it's Sp name is not original) and a parrot (Lola).
I love the -A music, because I play the piano, the guitar (a little), + accordion,... etc. drummer WC and all WC percusion Sp too but, the piano is par exellence the more sublime of the instruments and it's fantastic. In my free-time I play the piano or other WC instrument, I spend a lot of time in WC the instruments but I'm not WC realize SP of - this. I think that this Art is very important :)
Bye!!
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hey C !my C name's Javi. I have WC 17 years IS, Im Sp from equator C but +W lifeWF whith Sp my family in spain C since 2000. this C years S/P i C study Batxiller (trying to :)) in the most betterWF school of barcelona IES Barri Besos,
I love playing the guitar..yeahh, snowboard,playing basketball and reading ( I recommend the Dan Brown book's Sp angels & demons C)
My favourite music is salsa, hip hop , rock, and more:) see C +W later
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My name is Natàlia.I'm 17 and I live in Barcelona, i C like my city but there is too much contamination WC.
I study first of Batxillerat in the school; P I.E.S Barri Besos WO.
I live with my parents; P Montse and Ramon, and my older sister; P Raquel, and sometimes +W my grandmother.
I love to -W the -A animals, in my floorWC 6 cats and one dog live WO, all were gathered of WC the street or +W the camping.
I adore to go WF to the camping, there go to the party MNC and I dance, +W is a festival WC of WC Saturday night.Also I like WO the -A theater, I am +A actrees of the group the theater of the school WO.
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My name is Yaiza , I am fifteen years old and I study first of Batxillerat at IES Barri Besòs.
I have a brother, his name is Yeray and he is five years old. My parents are called Juan and Lidia. They are forty-three and forty-five years old.
I have two pets,they are fishes.Their names are Anakin and DarthVader.
One of my hobbies is listening to music. I like lot of groups of music but my favourite group is "El Canto del Loco". Without music I don't live!
I also like going out with my friends and going to shopping.I love going to the discos. Dancing is one of my hobbies. Another of my hobbies is chatting with friends.
I hate tennis matches. I get bored seeing them. I don't like going to buy food, it is too boring. I also hate "heavy" music.
Hello my name is Israel, Isra for a friends.
I am 16 years old, I live with my brothers and my mother,
I have 8 months in Barcelona and study in IES Barri Besòs.
I like to enjoy my free time in celebrations, partys or with friends
I am very fanatic to the sport and the art
Hi, my name's Vero. I'm 16 and I study first of Batchillerat at IES Barri Besòs.
I live in Barcelona with my parents and my brother. My parents are called Juan Manuel and Montse and they are 39 and 37 years old. My brother's name is Raúl and he's five years old. I've got a dog, his name is Crispy.
I like listening music and going to the cinema. I love going with my best friend Sabina. My favourite subject is Maths.
Hi, my name is Sabina. I'm 16 years old. I'm from Uzbekistan, but I live with my parents in Barcelona. I've got two sisters, their names are Cristina and Marta. I like listening to music and going to the disco with my best friend, Vero.
Hello, my name's Sonia.I'm fifteen years old, but on Sunday twenty-three (in seven days)sixteen.
I live in Barcelona with my parents and my sister. My parents are called Cristina(42 years old) and Francisco(49 years old).
My sister's name is Marta,is very naughty and very affectionate.
I study first of Batchillerat at I.E.S Barri Besòs. In two years I will go to selectivity and to the university also.
I love training martial arts. I like listening to music, going to cinema and to walk.
Good Bye!!
Hi! My name is Pilar but for my friends I'm Pili and I'm seventeen years old.I borned the three of Genuary in Barcelona.Actuallity I live with my grandmother Paquita in "LA MINA" district,the people think than my district is dangerous but it isn't true,only is fame.
I'm study first of Batchillerat in I.E.S .
The Saturdays and Sundays i'm work in burger king.
My hobbies prefer is to listening and dancing latin music and blak music(hip-hop,r&b..)
I like much the pets like the dog,cats but the tigers is my animal prefer.
I don't like much to go out at night I'm more of house.
Hi! My name´s is Antonio. I live in Barcelona, in Spain, with my family. I'm 16 years old. I've got one sister and one brother. They name are Yani and Miguel. I haven't got pet.
My favourite hobbies are playing basketball and listening to music. I've got some balls and CDs. Another WC I love going cinema, but I hate geography subjet is very boring, and my favourite subject is technology, beacuse is very easy and I love doing work technlogy.
My name is Albert. I’m 16 and I live in Barcelona.
I love my city but I think is too dirty, too noisy… but it's my city and it’s the best.
I have a brother, a great brother, but sometimes I don’t think so, only sometimes.
Nowadays I study first of “Batxillerat”, non obligatory education, and I want to finish this in two years.
I love listening to music. I like a lot of different types of music, international bands like Maximo Park or Peter Bjorn and John, Catalan or Valencian bands, house…
Music is very important.
Another thing I love is nature. I love nature more than music, and I’m so sad and worried when somebody destroys it, but it is very usual and only some people do anything to avoid the destruction of the environment.
I adore “Barça” and its players, its colours, its… I adore all about Barça and I’m so sad when it loses a match. All my family is “culé” and I’m “culé” too, of course, my blood is blue and maroon, :D
Good bye and be happy.
Hello my name is Laura. I'm 16 years old. I've got a brother his name is Miguel Angel and he is 16 years old. I live with my parents in Barcelona in Spain.My mother is 49 years old and my father is 50 years old.
I study at the IES Barri Besos. I'm doing first of batxillerat.
My favourite subject is maths.I like listening to music but I haven't got favourite group. I like dancing in the disco with my friends.
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