zhao said...
It was night and Juan was going at his friends’ house but suddenly it began to rain and IT began to appear foggy and he began to run but he was cold and later he was freezing. He began TO run faster TOWARDS at his house.
Thirty minutes later he arrived AT his house and he WAS very happy. Suddenly and SOMEBODY switch off THE Light. He WAS SCARED and he BEGAN TO cry and the door closed suddenly WHEN he was going to HIS bedroom. When he was going to bed, but IN the bed THERE WAS ANother person and he screamed.
Later he was watching the bed and he saw his friends and his friends said happy birthday. He said It is fantastic but he was afraid, but he said IT IS an experience and they were going to the party. He said it was very incredible AND the door closed and the light WAS switched off. It was very cool, but they friends said That this time it wasn’t them!... (5/10) NEXT TIME TELL ME YOUR DOUBTS!
Thirty minutes later he arrived AT his house and he WAS very happy. Suddenly and SOMEBODY switch off THE Light. He WAS SCARED and he BEGAN TO cry and the door closed suddenly WHEN he was going to HIS bedroom. When he was going to bed, but IN the bed THERE WAS ANother person and he screamed.
Later he was watching the bed and he saw his friends and his friends said happy birthday. He said It is fantastic but he was afraid, but he said IT IS an experience and they were going to the party. He said it was very incredible AND the door closed and the light WAS switched off. It was very cool, but they friends said That this time it wasn’t them!... (5/10) NEXT TIME TELL ME YOUR DOUBTS!
Yaiza said...
It was a cold morning and Hanna was running across the field. Every morning she was going out to run, she loved sports. The field was deserted but suddenly she heard a shout. The shout came from a house. She went to the house. She was frightened.
When she was near the house she looked through the windows. She saw a woman in the bed. The woman had a baby in her arms. The baby was crying but the woman wasn’t doing anything. Hanna was calling the police when she saw that the mobile phone didn’t have coverage. She entered to the room through the windows. The woman was dead. Hanna took the baby rapidly. On a table there was a baby bottle. Hanna was feeding the baby when a man appeared.
Hanna was scared. He said to her that he would not do anything to her. He told her that he didn’t kill the woman. She was sick and was living alone with his son. He was a hunter and had seen the dead woman. He couldn’t call the police because he didn’t have a mobile phone. Hanna, the baby and the hunter went towards the police station. But the man was taking them through a strange way. Hanna asked him what he was doing, he didn’t answer her.Nowadays noboby knows anything about them. (10/10) VERY GOOD YAIZA!
When she was near the house she looked through the windows. She saw a woman in the bed. The woman had a baby in her arms. The baby was crying but the woman wasn’t doing anything. Hanna was calling the police when she saw that the mobile phone didn’t have coverage. She entered to the room through the windows. The woman was dead. Hanna took the baby rapidly. On a table there was a baby bottle. Hanna was feeding the baby when a man appeared.
Hanna was scared. He said to her that he would not do anything to her. He told her that he didn’t kill the woman. She was sick and was living alone with his son. He was a hunter and had seen the dead woman. He couldn’t call the police because he didn’t have a mobile phone. Hanna, the baby and the hunter went towards the police station. But the man was taking them through a strange way. Hanna asked him what he was doing, he didn’t answer her.Nowadays noboby knows anything about them. (10/10) VERY GOOD YAIZA!
Sonia... said...
It was a hot night of summer, when Michelle remained in THE house of his friend Sasha, because his parents had gone away the weekend. They were eating delicacies and saw WATCHING a movie when suddenly, there was a knock on the door.
They opened the door and there was nobody, then they begun to BE scareD. They returned to the dining room and the phone rang. They decided to go out to ask for help. They didn't know where they were going. Suddenly they heard a few steps. Every time they were walking faster.
They came to a very solitary street, where they found a vagabond TRAMP. Michelle saw a shade and Sasha decided to go to the police. Michelle, with fear, agreed. Running they came to the police and there they met his parents, friends and others, giving them a surprise. (8/10) WELL-DONE SONIA!
Bye!!
They opened the door and there was nobody, then they begun to BE scareD. They returned to the dining room and the phone rang. They decided to go out to ask for help. They didn't know where they were going. Suddenly they heard a few steps. Every time they were walking faster.
They came to a very solitary street, where they found a vagabond TRAMP. Michelle saw a shade and Sasha decided to go to the police. Michelle, with fear, agreed. Running they came to the police and there they met his parents, friends and others, giving them a surprise. (8/10) WELL-DONE SONIA!
Bye!!
laura said...
My story began on a Winter's Night. It was one of those nights WHICH was very cold and windy. At that time I was in my house makING a chocolate cake.
On the street don’t heard otherwise than wind, IN THE STREET A STRONG WIND WAS BLOWING fall a few began drops of rain A FEW DROPS OF RAIN BEGAN TO FALL DOWN. Suddenly there was nobody on the streets. That night I stayed alone at home. My parents and my brother had gone to see my grandmother.
Suddenly the light went OFF, I entered my room to get the phone and fOUnd a few candles. .Then, I heard some keys trying to open the door, I was paralyzed, Who could it be? NOT My parents because they were in house of AT my grandmother’S. I went running and suddenly the door was opened. In the end it was my mother who had forgotten the keys oF the car. (6/10)
On the street don’t heard otherwise than wind, IN THE STREET A STRONG WIND WAS BLOWING fall a few began drops of rain A FEW DROPS OF RAIN BEGAN TO FALL DOWN. Suddenly there was nobody on the streets. That night I stayed alone at home. My parents and my brother had gone to see my grandmother.
Suddenly the light went OFF, I entered my room to get the phone and fOUnd a few candles. .Then, I heard some keys trying to open the door, I was paralyzed, Who could it be? NOT My parents because they were in house of AT my grandmother’S. I went running and suddenly the door was opened. In the end it was my mother who had forgotten the keys oF the car. (6/10)
SCARY MOVIE 3!
Albert Giralt said...
It was a stormy night and Reynolds was alone at home, bored and waiting for his girlfriend Ella to do anything interesting. There were only some people running to their houses in the streets and the storm was more and more heavy. Suddenly the doorbell rang.
Reynolds opened the door and there was not anybody. Then he went to the back of the house. He looked for somebody but he didn’t find anybody. While he was looking, somebody closed the door. He heard the sudden closing of the door and began to be frightened. Immediately Reynolds came into house and took a bat. Quickly he tried to call the police, but the pHone’s cable WIRE was cut. The situation was too frightening. Reynolds was going slowly upstairs when a man wearing black clothes appeared upstairs. Reynolds saw the man and after he fell downstairs.
Reynolds was unconscious for ten minutes. When he opened his eyes Ella was lying and crying beside him. He wake up suffocated and she stopped crying and began to shout absurd words. Then Reynolds began to be annoyed because he didn’t understand what was happening. He asked Ella and she, annoyed too, told him what was happening. The man who Reynolds saw wearing black clothes was a disgusting burglar. Reynolds fell downstairs because the burglar shot him a sleeping dart. The burglar stole all valuable things and surely he was laughing in someplace. Finally Reynolds began to cry, the burglar HAD stoleN his Play Station and so, he will be bored for the rest of his adolescence. (9/10)
Reynolds opened the door and there was not anybody. Then he went to the back of the house. He looked for somebody but he didn’t find anybody. While he was looking, somebody closed the door. He heard the sudden closing of the door and began to be frightened. Immediately Reynolds came into house and took a bat. Quickly he tried to call the police, but the pHone’s cable WIRE was cut. The situation was too frightening. Reynolds was going slowly upstairs when a man wearing black clothes appeared upstairs. Reynolds saw the man and after he fell downstairs.
Reynolds was unconscious for ten minutes. When he opened his eyes Ella was lying and crying beside him. He wake up suffocated and she stopped crying and began to shout absurd words. Then Reynolds began to be annoyed because he didn’t understand what was happening. He asked Ella and she, annoyed too, told him what was happening. The man who Reynolds saw wearing black clothes was a disgusting burglar. Reynolds fell downstairs because the burglar shot him a sleeping dart. The burglar stole all valuable things and surely he was laughing in someplace. Finally Reynolds began to cry, the burglar HAD stoleN his Play Station and so, he will be bored for the rest of his adolescence. (9/10)
michael said...
One day, Anne's parents were travelling and in order that she was not so alone, she invited a friend overnight. That morning she had watched news and she had listened that a murderer had escaped the previous night.
Her friend went to Anne’s house and they were speaking all night long but when they were in Anne’s bedroom they began to listen HEAR an open tap. Anne did not want to go downstairs because she had fear WAS SCARED but her friend WASN’T and went to have a look. Happened AFTER15 minutes her friend did not come back. ANother 15 minutes but she did not come back. In this moment Anne began to feel that her dog was sucking the HER hand because when dogs are afraid they suck their owners. When happened one hour more AND Anne went to downstairs. She went to the kitchen and found her friend and her dog dead on the floor. She began to cry while she was reading a text on the wall. Text said “You never think that is the dog who sucks you the hand”. Suddenly the murderer appeared and he stuck a knife to her.
The next morning when her parents came back to their home, they found Anne’s friend, the dog and Anne dead on the floor’s kitchen, the tap was open and all were wet. When the police arrived the murderer was far away in another house waiting for his next victims. (7/10)
Thank you for giving us more time! NOT AT ALL!
Her friend went to Anne’s house and they were speaking all night long but when they were in Anne’s bedroom they began to listen HEAR an open tap. Anne did not want to go downstairs because she had fear WAS SCARED but her friend WASN’T and went to have a look. Happened AFTER15 minutes her friend did not come back. ANother 15 minutes but she did not come back. In this moment Anne began to feel that her dog was sucking the HER hand because when dogs are afraid they suck their owners. When happened one hour more AND Anne went to downstairs. She went to the kitchen and found her friend and her dog dead on the floor. She began to cry while she was reading a text on the wall. Text said “You never think that is the dog who sucks you the hand”. Suddenly the murderer appeared and he stuck a knife to her.
The next morning when her parents came back to their home, they found Anne’s friend, the dog and Anne dead on the floor’s kitchen, the tap was open and all were wet. When the police arrived the murderer was far away in another house waiting for his next victims. (7/10)
Thank you for giving us more time! NOT AT ALL!
vero said...
Maria lived with her best friend Judith in a house, which was in the forest. That night it was raining hard and a cold wind was blowing. It was a dense fog in the road. Maria and Judith had been to a restaurant in the city for dinner.
Judith took the car to go to the restaurant, while Maria stayed at home. Judith, as she approached the car, heard a few steps behind her, but she gave them no importance. While Judith was driving, she saw that a car approached her, the lights of the car dazzled her. Judith wanted to stop and then realizeD that the brakes weren’t working and suddenly crashed. When Maria arrived at the restaurant she realized that Judith wasn‘t there. She decided to go home to see if Judith was there, and when she arrived home there wasn’t anybody. Then she called to HER mobile phone, but she doesn’t tell DIDN’T ANSWER. Maria went to the forest to look for her and saw the car with Judith inside. She called an ambulance and when it arrived, they took Judith to hospital.
Next week Maria went in search of Judith to hospital. Fortunately Judith had just ONLY suffered a blow on the head. Maria took her home and at night the ambulance boy appeared VISITED HER. Next year Judith married the boy. (7/10) A BIT DELAYED!!
Judith took the car to go to the restaurant, while Maria stayed at home. Judith, as she approached the car, heard a few steps behind her, but she gave them no importance. While Judith was driving, she saw that a car approached her, the lights of the car dazzled her. Judith wanted to stop and then realizeD that the brakes weren’t working and suddenly crashed. When Maria arrived at the restaurant she realized that Judith wasn‘t there. She decided to go home to see if Judith was there, and when she arrived home there wasn’t anybody. Then she called to HER mobile phone, but she doesn’t tell DIDN’T ANSWER. Maria went to the forest to look for her and saw the car with Judith inside. She called an ambulance and when it arrived, they took Judith to hospital.
Next week Maria went in search of Judith to hospital. Fortunately Judith had just ONLY suffered a blow on the head. Maria took her home and at night the ambulance boy appeared VISITED HER. Next year Judith married the boy. (7/10) A BIT DELAYED!!
Sabina said...
It was a summer night. Victoria and her lover David were newly married,and then they decided to go on a cruise in the Caribbean Sea. The ship was big, as in the dreams of the newlyweds. Everything was perfect.
That night the wind WAS BLOWING blew hard. Victoria had a presentiment (PREMONITION OR FEELING IS BETTER) that something was going to go wrong. That something bad was going to happen.
At dinner time Victoria and her husband David went to the restaurant, and heard that the captain of the ship informed the port that the ship was losing control. A few minutes later the captain of the ship informed the passengers that the boat was losing control as it was coming to the Bermuda Triangle. Passengers were nervous and just the propeller was hooked with algae. The ship couldn’t move. Then the captain decided to call the port and they sent assistance.They spent a few hours and the boat lost control completely.The assistance didn't arrive. So Victoria and David decided to take a boat and go back, because the situation was dangerous.
A week later Victoria and David heard the news that the boat in which they were was HAD disappeared and there wasn't any survivor. (7/10) A BIT DELAYED!
That night the wind WAS BLOWING blew hard. Victoria had a presentiment (PREMONITION OR FEELING IS BETTER) that something was going to go wrong. That something bad was going to happen.
At dinner time Victoria and her husband David went to the restaurant, and heard that the captain of the ship informed the port that the ship was losing control. A few minutes later the captain of the ship informed the passengers that the boat was losing control as it was coming to the Bermuda Triangle. Passengers were nervous and just the propeller was hooked with algae. The ship couldn’t move. Then the captain decided to call the port and they sent assistance.They spent a few hours and the boat lost control completely.The assistance didn't arrive. So Victoria and David decided to take a boat and go back, because the situation was dangerous.
A week later Victoria and David heard the news that the boat in which they were was HAD disappeared and there wasn't any survivor. (7/10) A BIT DELAYED!
Nadya Waheed said...
It was a night that I was watching TV at night –W -W. I had just seen the "Madeleine case" on TV, and I was frightend Sp.
I was half an hour without being able to sleep, because I closed my eyes and I saw in my mind Gerry nad Sp Kate McCann with they`re Sp daughter Madeleine`s boddy Sp in their car, taking her to a mountain to burry Sp the ded Sp boddy Sp.
Finaly,I wa Sp able to sleep, because I thought it was just a silly TV gossip about Praia da Luz, and it was nothing to do with me.
I was half an hour without being able to sleep, because I closed my eyes and I saw in my mind Gerry nad Sp Kate McCann with they`re Sp daughter Madeleine`s boddy Sp in their car, taking her to a mountain to burry Sp the ded Sp boddy Sp.
Finaly,I wa Sp able to sleep, because I thought it was just a silly TV gossip about Praia da Luz, and it was nothing to do with me.
I SAID THREE PARAGRAPHS NADIA, AND 100 WORDS, WRITE A LONGER ONE, PLEASE, IT SHOULD BE EASY FOR YOU TO DO IT MUCH BETTER!(4/10)
alex rivera said...
One night of 2000 in Ecuador, Where Ilived rained was stronger and thumder. 1 am Some curb noise. I haved lot fear and my brohers whit my parents, do not to knewed and the rained very stronged . They walk through our yard.We
ask me helping to the tenants and caming make that are desparting. was a experience incredible. Put also caned been very dreadful.
ask me helping to the tenants and caming make that are desparting. was a experience incredible. Put also caned been very dreadful.
DEAR ALEX, TRY TO WRITE VERY SIMPLE THINGS AND LITTLE BY LITTLE YOUR WRITING WILL IMPROVE! (2/10)
Eliana Córdova said...
My history began during one night very cold WO. It was twelve o'clock of the WC night, it(she) was alone in house because my family had gone home of my premium(cousin). I was in the room seeing the televición a movie of terror, it was a question of a few ghosts. Tape-worm little fear. Depronto listens(listen) to a noise in my room, not wise if to enter or not, seconds but late the door was opened and listens(listen) to steps in the corridor. I covered myself with the blanket, it(she) was scared depronto I fight the foot and shout. And I realized that she was my small sister who had remained slept in my room. But scare very much.
HEY BEAUTY, THE STORY IS NICE, BUT...IF YOU USE THE TRANSLATOR I CANNOT HELP YOU!!!!! (1/10)
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