19/11/11

Well-done!!!!

Good Sunday evening dear you all,
here you are all your writings corrected
according to the Guide for correcting writing errors
(have a look at it in order to understand the abbreviations)




Hi! My nickname is Mike. I'm 16. I live in Barcelona with my family and I study at IES Barri Bèsos.
I spend my free-time reading books, drawing or listening to english C music (I like much RS)
There aren't much WC things which I don't like. But probably making the wash WC is the most I hate.
Finally I want to recommend a song: More than Words from Extreme
Good Weekend for you all!!!
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hello C, I am called manuel, I been WC 15 years old and I fulfill the -A 16 within two weeks. + study in WC the -A IES barri besòs of Barcelona, I am trainer of soccer 5
WC and I like music, the -A sports and to leave WC with the friends
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Hello P My name is Alex
I have WC 17 years I'm fron Equator but +W life WC in Barcelona with my mother end Sp my brother but +W have two brothers in Equator.
I'm studing Sp in WC the -A school IES Barri Besos WO.
I' ve must WC friends end Sp they are very entertainWC. My sport favourity WO Sp is the -A futbol Sp end Sp +W like listening to music end Sp too WO playing futbol in a equipo WC.
I've+W a rabbit. At school my favourity Sp subject are Historia end Economia Sp Sp Sp.
I like read WF bookS/P the WC filosofia Sp well I'm think MNC.
Well this in Sp the end.
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Hi! my C name's Gaby and I'm 16. I live in Barcelona with my parents and my brother (he's 20 and he's studying at University UPC WO).
I've got two pets, a cat (Mishu, I know that it's Sp name is not original) and a parrot (Lola).
I love the -A music, because I play the piano, the guitar (a little), + accordion,... etc. drummer WC and all WC percusion Sp too but, the piano is par exellence the more sublime of the instruments and it's fantastic. In my free-time I play the piano or other WC instrument, I spend a lot of time in WC the instruments but I'm not WC realize SP of - this. I think that this Art is very important :)
Bye!!
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hey C !my C name's Javi. I have WC 17 years IS, Im Sp from
equator C but +W lifeWF whith Sp my family in spain C since 2000. this C years S/P i C study Batxiller (trying to :)) in the most betterWF school of barcelona IES Barri Besos,
I love playing the guitar..yeahh, snowboard,playing basketball and reading ( I recommend the Dan
Brown book's Sp angels & demons C)
My favourite music is salsa, hip hop , rock, and more:)
see C +W later
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Hi!
My name is Natàlia.I'm 17 and I live in Barcelona,
i C like my city but there is too much contamination WC.
I study first of Batxillerat in the school
; P I.E.S Barri Besos WO.
I live with my parents
; P Montse and Ramon, and my older sister; P Raquel, and sometimes +W my grandmother.
I love
to -W the -A animals, in my floorWC 6 cats and one dog live WO, all were gathered of WC the street or +W the camping.
I adore
to go WF to the camping, there go to the party MNC and I dance, +W is a festival WC of WC Saturday night.Also I like WO the -A theater, I am +A actrees of the group the theater of the school WO.